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Post by xxahpokexx on Aug 9, 2006 22:40:37 GMT 7
hmmmm... addiction?
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Post by ragnarox on Aug 10, 2006 9:09:06 GMT 7
Just a regular fan... Beyond that is
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Post by Fab on Oct 15, 2006 13:43:50 GMT 7
Ok, Finally, my phase 4, EOY finally over, and i have gotten good grades. So here it is, phase 4, and oh, i'm gonna adopt another way of writing the conversation as this phase have just a length of talkings. The flashback is mainly in fabian point of view and the rest are just thrid person view. Also, the unveiling of something that may shock you.
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Phase 5 ; Meyrin
Athrun : So Fabian, I guess It's time to tell us what happened to you after that incident.
Fabian : Well, I don't really remember what happened to me between the crash and when i woke up. But it was like this.
*FLASHBACK*
Fabian : Ah!!!!
Lady : Are you awake, you have been unconsious for a day.
Fabian : Where am I and who are you? *As I sat up looking around.*
Lady : You are at my house, and my name's Meyrin Hawke. I found you at the beach near my house. What happened to you and what's your name. * Meyrin said as she sat me to comfort.*
Fabian : I'm Fabian Zala, I was in a battle not far from Orb when I was shot down. That was all I remembered.
Meyrin : Zala... Is your father by any chance Athrun Zala? * Meyrin handed me a cup of tea*
Fabian : How did you know? * As I started sipping the tea.*
Meyrin : Oh.. Er... I'm a friend of his and he's a hero among us after all. *She started looking wierd.*
Fabian : Oh, My dad never mentioned you before. It's a wonder why i feel connected to you considering I don't open up to strangers.
Meyrin : Well, Maybe it's because we are related... in some way.
Fabian : Maybe. * We both started laughing *
I don't know why but I kept have the feeling I have known Miss Meyrin before we met today, moreover, I talked to her alot like we are very close friends and talked about my mischiefs, my childishness and my life with her.
The Next day,.i woke up to hear the sounds of battles.
Fabian : Is there another battle again?
Meyrin : Yes, It's just like the day i found you, the battle could be heard and seen. The Orb forces seems to be in trouble again.
Miss Meyrin and me stood by the door and gazed at the raging sky.
Fabian : I need to help them, I have to, they need my help. * I said as I started running out.*
Meyrin : But how are you going to help them, do you think recklessness can help you, do you have a MS to help you?
I stopped in my tracks after hearing this, Miss Meyrin was right, how am i going to help, i don't have a gundam or MS to aid me. I stood outside looking helpless, dropped to my knees and thought that it was over. But then, she spoke.
Meyrin : come, follow me, I have the key to help you.
I turned my head to see her heading into her house again, I stood up and followed her, only to find a Gundam Dock with the legendary Akatsuki in it. Miss
Meyrin turned to me and said.
Meyrin : Take this and aid your friends, but do me a favour, pass this letter to your father for me,and take this too. It's a locket I made with stuffs lying around the beach, I has a small photo of me. Give it to your dad if he wants it or just keep it for yourself.
Fabian : Thanks, Miss Meyrin.
* END OF FLASHBACK *
Fabian: Here, this is the letter she wanted me to pass to you. And this is the locket. * I handed the locket and letter to Dad *
Athrun : Ok, I think you can go now, but promise me, do not mention of this locket and letter to anyone.
Fabian : Yes dad.
Cagalli : What does the letter say?
Athrun opened up the letter and read:
Dear Athrun, How has things been for you. I believe Fabian has told you of our meeting but don't worry, I have not told him anything that you have not wanted to, I'll leave it to you to tell him, but i'm just glad that I managed to see Fabian growing up just like you. It's been a long time and I do not hate you for your final decision. But I just long to see you one more time. I don't mind if you bring anyone, just let me see you one more time. Meyrin Hawke
Cagalli : Are you going to meet her?
Athurn : I suppose so, are you coming along?
Cagalli : I think it's better for the two of you to be alone together, don't worry about the kids, I'll make up an excuse for you.
Athrun : Thanks dear.
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That wraps up phase 5. May be short but nothing much to write for this phase. hope you guys get the clue. It's rather obvious.
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Post by Gary on Oct 15, 2006 13:48:49 GMT 7
ncie chapter cliffhanger... XD
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Post by ragnarox on Oct 16, 2006 9:36:18 GMT 7
I thought it'd be better if u used her surname: Hawke.... Miss. Hawke
Athrun is such a bad boy...
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Post by Fab on Oct 16, 2006 19:57:51 GMT 7
Oh hey, why didn't i thought of that, thx for that suggestion ragna, i'll be editing it in my computer one.
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Post by ragnarox on Oct 16, 2006 20:52:06 GMT 7
Sure thing. No sweat, dude!
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