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Post by Fab on Jun 1, 2006 12:29:13 GMT 7
[glow=blue,2,300] Gundam Seed ; Hope [/glow]
Seeing as quite and maybe one person have started writing here, it made me wanna write too. I know I'm not the best writer here or anywhere and seeing that my grammar is bad, please forgive and point out any mistakes you see in the future.
I will not reveal all character or MS yet as I will slowly reveal them as the story move on. This Story may mostly be a first-person view story. The Characters appearing will include characters from the anime Gundam Seed and Gundam Seed Destiny.Some of their name may sound weird but forgive me.
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Prolouge
[The Prolouge will be something like a diary]
C.E 73,
Earth Alliance Forces (EAF) and the ZAFT forces signed a new treaty at Onogoro Island. Soon after the signing of the treaty, ZAFT union took its remaining forces from around Earth and went back to PLANT using the Kaguya Mass Driver.
C.E 91
18 years have passed since the last war between the EAF and ZAFT. Peace is something you can see everywhere now. But hidden well in Eurasia is a group that eveyone has thought fallen, The Blue cosmos and a group that no one knows except to a few, Phantom Pain, a group that acts on it own and uses the EAF.
Athrun Zala and Kira Yamato along with everyone from the triple ship alliance have been staying in orb for a time and some of them had settled a family there. One of them are Athrun Zala and Cagalli Yula Attha.
Everyone on Earth or Plant thinks that war is over, but what they do not know is a power strong enough to bring the world in chaos is unleashing.
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Post by Gary on Jun 1, 2006 12:41:08 GMT 7
Cool starting! Word limit quite alright for a prolouge!
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Post by ragnarulz on Jun 1, 2006 13:43:40 GMT 7
Yay!!! This FanFic supports Athrun X Cagalli!!! Hell Yeah!!!
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Post by Fab on Jun 2, 2006 15:32:07 GMT 7
yes, i noe tt it's widespread but afterall, I'm a fan of it, so wat else.. Phrase 1 would probably out lateset by sunday
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Post by Fab on Jun 25, 2006 1:31:23 GMT 7
Sorry for the very late late posting of phrase 1 but here it is, the awaited Phase 1.
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Phase 1: The Crumbling Peace
Hi everybody, I'm Fabian, but people call me Fab for short. To say it nicely I'm not really a person who will express his feelings to strangers like how others are able. To be exact, I only express my feelings to my family and relatives and those who I have known for a long time and are close with. And to say it worse, I'm a cold person. I have two dreams in my life, one is to become a professional mechanic and secondly, to pilot the Justice Gundam.
"Hey Fab, Fab Fab Fab " A girl called out while running towards me.
Her name is Ciara Zala, my twin sister.
" What now Sis? "
" My friends are coming over later, so clear up your trash over here. " Ciara shouted.
" Sis, these are not trash, by the way, did Mum gave you permission. " I answered back as doubts ran through me.
" Of course, Dad gave his permission too. " Ciara answered back to me.
" Okok, give me a minute. " And I started keeping up the parts that my Dad bought for me.
I was suddenly struck with a feeling to look for my father after knowing that he was home. He was the man I most respect in my whole life and I'm gonna respect him a whole lot more after seeing his skills later on.
" Dad. "
" Hey Boy. " My Dad said.
Oh yea, I have not introduced him, his name is Athrun Zala, shocked are you. He is the best father in the world. And now who my mother you may ask, her name is Cagalli Yula Attha, president of Orb.
" So how's you project going, you know, the one for Gary. " My Dad said.
And who in the world is Gary you may ask, well, he is my best friend whom I met at my school. It's not a school where we learnt stuffs like Maths or English with textbook. But it's a place where we learnt and try to perfect our skills and knowledge about Mobile Suits and Gundams. We normally call it but the word " Academy " instead of the word " school ".
" It's going well, all I need left is to ask Mum to wrap it up for me and it's all done. "
" What did you make for him anyway son. " My Dad asked and I replied: " You'll know when tomorrow comes. "
Tomorrow is Gary's Birthday. Gary older than Ciara and me by 1 year. Seeing as his my best friend, I'm of course turning up for his party, and so is my parents and sister.
" Hey Fab. " Ciara suddenly came running at me as I was returning to my room.
" What's the matter now, Sis? "
" Linds here likes the kitty you made for me. She wants one too. " Ciara ssaid
" Tell her I'm sorry cause I can't make it now or plan to make it."
" Why not? " She asked back.
" I can't get any parts from Dad until the next three months. I just spent it all on Gary's birthday present. "
" Ok then, I'll tell her the bad news. " Ciara said as she returned to her room.
Sad but true, I can't get any parts from my Dad as they don't want me to be meddling with parts all the time so I recieved parts along with my allowance for the week.
The Next Day
The day I was waiting for, Gary's birthday, I had Mum wrapped up my gift for Gary and we sat in my Dad's car and he drove us to Gary's Home. He knew that road really well as it's his best friends home. We reached there in about a 5 minute drive.
" Hey Gary. "
" Hey Fab. " Gary shouted back as I was walking towards him.
Oh yea, Gary's full name is Gary Yamato. Yes, he is the son of Kira Yamato And Lacus Clyne. He is unlike me a "cold" person, he is the flipped side of me. Gary is the most carefree person I ever met. He takes things as they come and take things as they goes. He's rather humourous but are mostly lame. Some people even questioned our friendship, how can two people with two different personalities be such close friends.
" Hey Vic, You're here too. "
Vic, or to say Victor, he's also a friend I met at the Academy. He rather a humourous person but unlike Gary whose lame, he is more of the one who make funnier and less lame jokes and only makes it when it comes to him. Victor has been telling us tales of his of this girl who he has liked for a few months. He don't know her name or anything bout her. All he knows is that she always turns up at a eating house near his house for that's where he has been seeing her everytime.
" Of course I am, Gary's coldest joke always appear during his birthday." Victor joked
We started joking and playing. Then singing Gary the birthday song and cutting the cake, I presented to him his present. I stood there watching him open his present one by one until it's all left with one, and it's given to him by me. He opened it slowly and what I wanted to appear on his face did appeared, a open mouth due to amazement. " A mechanic tiger, oh my god Fab, thanks so much. " Gary said.
" Haha, Isn't it what you w...*SFX BOOM* " An explosion happened nearby and that was the first in years that an explosion happened in Orb.
" RUN KIDS, RUN TO THE SHELTER " Gary's Dad shouted.
" What's happening Dad. "
" Some Mobile suits are attacking us. KIRA." My Dad said as he looked to Kira and they nodded.
Gary and I knew immediately that they are going to help in the defense.
" Dad, let us help too. " Gary told his Dad.
" No, it's too dangerous. 'Sides, your mums are not gonna allowed it, but stay here and protect your mum and friends, you 2. " Gary's Dad said.
My Dad then ran into a special room whichs leads to an underground factory, I've been in there with Gary before. It's where the Archangel is currently docked and where several MS and Gundams are held in. Some of this includes the Infinite Justice and Strike Freedom Gundam. There were these two old gundams that our dads piloted before and left there just in case. We stayed in a room with everyone enduring sudden quakes and explosion but suddenly, without warning, Gary ran out of the shelter and back into the open field where we held Gary's party just now.
" Hey, where are you running off too? " I said as I ran after him.
" Hey, Fabian, come back here this instance. " " Hey, Gary, where are you going. " Both our mums said.
" Don't worry Mum, you too auntie Lacus, I'm gonna get Gary back into that darn shelter. "
I ran as fast as I could but even as a average runner, I could not outrun a sprinter who won medals and cups in race before. Gary began to slowed down and suddenly started searching for something, I caught up to him finally and pinned him on the floor to prevent another sudden explosion.
" What the hell are you doing. "
" This. " Gary said as he held up the mechanic tiger I made for him.
" Heads down Gary. " As a mobile suit came falling down to a nearby building.
" Man, I can't believe how the Orb defense force are crumbling. " Gary said as we observed how Murasames are falling down one by one. " If only we could do something."
" Hey, we can, let's go get those two unused gundams. "
" But we were told to... " Gary wasn't able to finish what he wanted to say as I pulled him along.
" I'm not born to really listen, you know. "
We got into the factory and luckily, everyone was trying to bring down the intruders that no one was there. And the two unused gundams were there too. this was when 1 of my dreams is going to be fulfilled.
" Justice mine. "
" Fine by me, I always wanted to pilot the Freedom Gundam. " Gary said.
I started up the Gundams and saw Gary giving me a thumbs up.
" Gary Yamato, Freedom Gundam, Launching, " " Fabian Zala, Justice Gundam, Taking off " Gary and I said at the same time as we take off into the skies.
" Cool, I always wanted to say that, you know. " Gary said.
" Haha, me too."
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That ends up Phase 1.
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Post by Gary on Jun 25, 2006 11:36:44 GMT 7
Cool!!! Tiger XD
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Post by lacusclyne on Jun 27, 2006 15:30:27 GMT 7
I kinda laughed when I found out that you meant CAGALLI,KIRA,LACUS AND ATHRUN had babies!!!!!!!Cool!!!Keep that up!'.<
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Post by ciara on Jul 2, 2006 13:20:51 GMT 7
OMG yay! Athrun and Cagalli are our parents! I honestly love this! It is funny because Gary is the son of Kira and Lacus XD Cute though!
This is so cool! I can't wait for phase 2. ;D
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Post by nightdancer on Jul 3, 2006 15:59:30 GMT 7
Very nice Chapter Fabian, I really enjoyed reading it (=
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Post by ragnarox on Jul 3, 2006 20:30:37 GMT 7
Auntie Lacus... Ageing is unavoidable... The truth hurts... T^T
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Post by lacusclyne on Jul 7, 2006 16:47:09 GMT 7
Lol,I agree with you,Ragna.
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Post by Fab on Jul 8, 2006 13:04:22 GMT 7
The awaited Phase 2 is finally here.
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Phase 2 : The Relighted Candle
Gary and I took off into the skies in the Freedom and Justice Gundam. This is the first time we are piloting Gundams in a real battle, we have been in many simulation but not anything like this. We both knew that anything can happen to us here, including death.
" Kira, what's the Justice And Freedom doing here. " Athrun asked after seeing the Justice and Freedom Gundam jetting towards the battlefield.
" Don't tell me it's those two. " Kira answered Athrun after too noticing the Justice and Freedom Gundam.
I was taking a look around the battlefield when I noticed that the attackers MS bears a EAF logo and ID. Following that, I saw the I.Justice and the S.Freedom gundam. Wanting to know about why the Earth Alliance is attacking us, I radioed over to the I.Justice Gundam asking my Dad:
" Dad, why are the EAF attacking us? "
Hearing my voice, my dad got worried of my safetly and ordered me to go back to the shelter, but befounded by the fact that the EAF was attacking Orb, I was determined to get an answer from my Dad. My Dad must have gotten irritated, after some time of me and Gary pestering him, he finally gave us a answer.
" I don't why. " That was the answer we got from my Dad and Unc Kira.
" If so.." Gary said.
" We will find the answer ourselves. " I continued.
" Hey, come back, boys. " Unc Kira ordered.
" Don't worry about them, we are here, and moreover, haven't we taken out the Nuclear reactor and replace it with a normal energy battery. They will return upon knowing they are depleting their power. " Athrun said to Kira,
We both flew in deeper into the battlefield as we took out the beam sabers and slashing the Jet Windams and Jet Dagger that were in the way. We were having so much fun protecting Orb and watching our fathers fight. They were simply awesome. Just like how we heard from the mouths of those who saw them fight during the war.
*BEEP BEEP BEEP* *Power Low*
" What!!, aren't this enpowered by nuclear power? "
" Fab, I just did a check on the power, it seems that our fathers have replaced it with a normal energy battery but contains a higher energy than the normal ones. " Gary radioed over after doing a check on the Freedom Gundam.
" Let's get back this moment now. "
We flew back but was keep being intercepted by beams and rockets directed at us.
" Argh, I'm losing power and fast. " Gary roared.
" Gary, get back with this first. " I detached the Fatum-00 from the back of the Justice and sent it to the Freedom to flight it back to the ground.
It was all me now, I was alone there trying to get back to the grounds while being attacked again and again by those darn Earth Alliance MS.
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I was flighting back to the grounds fast thanks to Fab. But I can't help thinking of how he is doing, he was also low on power. Reaching the grounds, I got out of the Freedom's cockpit and turned back looking at the skies, the fight was over, Orb managed to hold back the attack. I saw the I.Justice and S.Freedom landing at somewhere near me but Fab was nowhere to be seen.
"Gary, where's Fabian. " Unc Athrun asked as he's running towards me.
" I don't know, he sent me back with the Fatum-00 but after that he was gone. "
Soon, I saw Mum, Aunt Cagalli and the others running towards where we were.
" Where's Fabian? " Aunt Cagalli asked.
" He's gone missing. " Dad said.
I turned over to Unc Athrun but saw him running over to the I.Justice Gundam. Following that, I could see Aunt Cagalli taking out her cellphone and hearing her mentioning something of forming a search party immediately.
" Where is Fabian " Ciara asked.
At the moment that she asked this question, I started feeling guilty.
" I'm sorry, it's all my fault that Fab has gone missing, if he hadn't gave me the Fatum, but used it for himself, he would have been here. " I shouted it all out and tears started to flow out by itselves.
" It's not your fault. " My mum said as she came over to me and gave me a hug. " You would have done the same if you were piloting the Justice. "
Although my Mum said this, I still had a sense of guilty, and when I saw Aunt Cagalli walking towards me, I suddenly had this urge to run away.
Aunt Cagalli walked right up to me and said, " You don't have to apologize Gary, I know Fabian better than you, it's just like him to do that and I'm proud that he did not think of saving himself. I know his going to be fine, so don't worry. "
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Note: I'm using Unc for Uncle as of this Phase onwards. I.Justice and S.Freedom stands for Infinite Justice and Strike Freedom.
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Post by Gary on Jul 8, 2006 13:23:29 GMT 7
O.o I thought I would have been the 1 shot down... >.< XD hahahaha Nice 1
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Post by ragnarox on Jul 8, 2006 14:43:25 GMT 7
Changing the powerplant has dire consequences! XD
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Post by Gary on Jul 8, 2006 21:23:50 GMT 7
XD it means u die faster XD
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