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Post by xxahpokexx on Jul 25, 2006 22:21:10 GMT 7
dude ur so right XD, juz copy off ragna XD summthing summthing Poke XD
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Post by ragnarox on Jul 26, 2006 9:10:48 GMT 7
He means, Daisuke "Poke" Yamabuki
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Post by xxahpokexx on Jul 26, 2006 10:20:26 GMT 7
o.O i do?
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Post by ragnarox on Jul 26, 2006 10:26:05 GMT 7
Coz that's wat u r refering to...
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Post by xxahpokexx on Jul 26, 2006 10:26:53 GMT 7
o.O ya i am XD
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Athrun Zala, Justice. Launching
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Post by Fab on Aug 6, 2006 1:20:56 GMT 7
Sorry it took so long but my schoolwork has increased like hell all thanks to my final year exams. But I'll be trying to get Phases up as fast as I can.
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Phase 4 ; The Returning Hope
*Beep Beep Beep*
I closed my eyes waiting for the impact, but it seems like I waited forever. It was until I thought that I was dead when I opened my eyes and saw it. The
Legendary Golden Gundam, the Akatsuki, right before my eyes, deflecting the beams for me. Words has it that after the C.E 73 war. The Akatsuki was locked
up as a symbol of Peace. But what was it doing here?
[ Change Of View ( 3rd person view) ]
" Meryin " Athrun shouted after seeing the Akatsuki.
" Athrun, we should force back the enemies first " Kira radioed over.
"Who are you? " Gary Radioed over to the Akatsuki.
Without replying, the Akatsuki took out its Beam rigle and began shooting down the Earth Alliance Forces. Gary however, was forced to land down as the
Buster was low on power. Just as the EAF were pushing into the Orb grounds, a whole fleet of Murasame, Astray and battleships came out of nowhere and
started backing up the S.Freedom, I.Justice and the Akatsuki.
As the EAF were being pushed further and further by the Orb Defense, battleships of the EAF started shooting out retreating signals.
After the EAF retreated, Athrun immediately landed down beside the Akatsuki, and ran over to it shouting out the name Meryin. But, when he saw the pilot,
he became dissapointed, well, half-dissapointed.
" Fabian. " Gary came over from behind.
" Fabian? " Kira said.
" Hey all. " Fabian said.
Just about at the same time, Cagalli, Lacus and Ciara came out and saw the Akatsuki and Fabian.
" FAB. " Ciara ran over as tears started rolling down.
Cagalli walked over to Athrun.
" The Akatsuki, do you think he met her? " Cagalli wispered to Athrun.
" I suppose so. " Athrun wispered back.
" Hey Fab, what happened to you all this time? " Gary asked as he jumped up and down.
" Well, it's a long story and..." Fabian said but was interupted.
" Hey Gary, Fabian must be tired, let him rest for the day and he will tell you the whole story some other day. " Kira said.
" Okok, I just so glad that Fab alright. " Gary said.
" Fabian, I want to have a talk with you later, so go take a rest now. " Athrun said.
" But the Akatsuki.." Fabian said.
" Don't worry, we will dock it. " Athrun said.
" Oh alright. " Fabian said as he sulked off.
" How did Dad know bout this Meryin lady who saved me. Is she a friend of dad too? " Fabian thought as he walked off.
(Later That Night)
Athrun and Cagalli called Fabian in to their room.
" Fabian, I want to hear about your story now. " Athrun said.
" Ok Dad. " Fabian said.
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End of Phase 4. Short I know but i must end here for my next phase.
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Post by ragnarox on Aug 6, 2006 9:17:23 GMT 7
C'mon! There's no need to rush! It will deprove your performance! Besides, there's a lot of time after EOY Exams!
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Post by xxahpokexx on Aug 6, 2006 12:32:08 GMT 7
EXAMs r nt important if u can rely on puny test to pass XD i always do tt
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Post by ragnarox on Aug 6, 2006 13:24:57 GMT 7
I prefer a bitter starting with a sweet ending than vice versa
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Post by ciara on Aug 7, 2006 5:59:27 GMT 7
Whoa that is short!
I can't wait for the next chapter. I'd want to hear how Fab would tell the story to Athrun.
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Post by ragnarox on Aug 7, 2006 7:09:31 GMT 7
Speaking to a superstar!!! w00t!
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Post by xxahpokexx on Aug 7, 2006 12:29:30 GMT 7
lolx is it tt much of a deal?
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Post by ragnarox on Aug 7, 2006 20:17:14 GMT 7
Well, erm... Gah... It's a FanFic afterall... That's how fans do it!
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Post by xxahpokexx on Aug 8, 2006 22:18:17 GMT 7
hmmm fretish?
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Post by ragnarox on Aug 9, 2006 13:01:56 GMT 7
Fetish... Can't be possible to that extent!
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