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Post by Gary on Jun 24, 2006 16:59:12 GMT 7
[glow=red,2,300]GUNDAM SEED XTREME[/glow]This will be a new fanfic that I will be creating call Gundam Seed Xtreme. Hope you guys will enjoy this. The character and mecha section: moster82.proboards52.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=sc&thread=1151143249============================================== ProloungeIt is 4 years after the war between Orb and Zaft. With this, Laucs is now the new chairman of Zaft and Cagalli is the head of Orb. Torgether, they formed a new union, the Zorb. Earth Alliance on the other hand, begin a new motion to get rid of the Blue Comos within and thus, the battle of Earth Alliance and Blue Comos begin. The year is now C.E 76...
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Post by Gary on Jun 24, 2006 22:32:51 GMT 7
[glow=blue,2,300]Gundam Seed Xtreme[/glow] Phrase 01-The fire of the night
The year is C.E 74. It has been 2 years since the last war. Now, in Singapore, peace has return. Zorb has recently taken over this area from the Blue Comos. Pilots are mostly resting in the hangers, hanging out and enjoying the time with their friends. One such pilot is Gary.
"Hey, what's up?" Gary asked the rest of the other pilots in the hanger number 59 where his mobile suit is in. Truth is, all this other pilots doesn't know him yet because they're from ZAFT whereas he's from Orb. Without a doubt in his mind, he is all ready to make some new friends.
"Lookie here, a BLUE COAT! Well, said here that only RED COATS are allowed to enter, why are you here?"
"Yeah blue boy, get lost. You're no match for Red Coats. Go back to Orb, this isn't the place where you should be hanging out."
"Hey hey, cool down, my mobile suit is stationed here! I'll just leave you guys here...I'll be over there, if you need anything, just call me." Gary said before walking over to his mobile suit, a murasame. As usual, Gary got back to his mobile suit and begin to do some mantiance on it. No one has ever like a blue coat like Gary before. Even if he tries hard, all he end up is being used. ========================================================================== During that time Gary was fixing his mobile suit...
"Seems like Zorb is creating some new mobile suit in Singapore isn't it? That's why they fought so hard to regain that terrority."
"Looking at these photos(Look at photos of a unknown mobile suit in developing as they are being thrown across the table), it is true...We have to either destroy them or steal them."
"I vote for stealing...We could always use some extra mobile suits here."
*Slams his fist on the table* "Alright, we will begin operation 'Ragnarok' on Singapore at 0000 hours." =========================================================================== After some time, the mantiance work is done on Gary's murasame. With that, he went out of the hanger for some fresh air...
"The air is so fresh...." *BOOM!* "What the..."
Exploitation sounds were everywhere. Hangers were being bombard as Blue Comos Jet Daggers flew though the sky, destroying hangers, ensuring that resistance is futile. No Mobile suit could launch out. Once they walk into open ground, they're fight upon. At the bay, underwater Vosgulov class submarines were being destroyed Forbidden Vortex.
"RED ALERT! RED ALERT! ENEMY ATTACKING, ALL MOBILE SUITS PLEASE LAUNCH!" the intercom sounded. Gary begun to rush to his hanger but seconds before he reaches it, a beam destroyed it. Without a place to go, and a mobile suit to fight back it is hopeless. Blue Comos is launching a full scale attack on Singapore. =========================================================================== "WOOT WOOT WOOT, RESISTANCE IS FUTILE!" Dope yelled out as he blasted a few hangers from his Jet Dagger L. "THIS IS WAY FUN!!!!!!!!"
"Don't play so much and go get those mobile suits. This is an order."
"Yeah yeah...Man, and I was having so much fun..." Dope said as he landed his Jet Dagger L and prepare his pistol for killing. ============================================================================ That the same time, Gary ran to a nearby hanger which is untouched by any beam. It was surprising that this hanger was untouched by anything! Talk about being lucky! There, was an small tunnel leading to the basement. Gary went into it as being underground would be safer then above. Once reached the bottom, he saw 6 new mobile suit laying on the ground. With it, he saw gun-fighting below as he hid above. Taking out his pistol, he shot a Blue Comos pilot and killed him.
"Darn it, I'm out of bullets..." he said as he jumped down into the cockpit and started up the mobile suit...
"This is fun!" Dope laughed out loud as he climbed into 1 of the unknown mobile suit and started up the system...
Nearby, a boy jumped into a cockpit and killed the Blue Comos pilot attempting to start up the mobile suit. Next, he too, started up the mobile suit as 4 other mobile...
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Post by Fab on Jun 25, 2006 0:14:32 GMT 7
Spelling errors here and there, not really a good start but ok. Oh yae, i found out something funny too. You wasted all your ammunition on a single blue cosmo dude?
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Post by lacusclyne on Jun 27, 2006 15:31:59 GMT 7
>.< Anyways,it was pretty good too!Keep it up!!!'.<
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Post by nomadderwad on Jun 28, 2006 8:02:43 GMT 7
On the behalf of RagnaRulZ: Having the plot in Singapore is very unique (and very ). Nothing much can be said until the next few Phase arrive. (BTW, RagnaRulZ's going to return to have his FanFic back here. He said that he's got a new phase fully typed out.) I got spoilers from him. Phase 14 Found inside the Abyss *Returns spotlight to Gary*
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Post by lacusclyne on Jun 30, 2006 19:20:04 GMT 7
Inside the Abyss?!Lol!!!(P.S.I am trying to be friendly.I am not arguing or whatsoever,k?^_^)
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Post by Fab on Jul 1, 2006 13:27:26 GMT 7
nomadderwad, try not to post stuffs not related to this fanfic here, instead, you can post in the random rant or somewhere in the spam forum
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Post by xxahpokexx on Jul 9, 2006 10:22:07 GMT 7
2 words, its related... juZ U DUNNO IT!
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Post by ragnarox on Jul 9, 2006 12:50:33 GMT 7
Crap that NoMadderWad... He doesn't noe anything... Good thing I made him delete his account in my comp...
I looking forward to ur next chapter, Gary!
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Post by xxahpokexx on Jul 9, 2006 13:00:40 GMT 7
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Post by Gary on Jul 24, 2006 20:45:02 GMT 7
Phrase 02-The Repetition of History 'Generation Unrestricted Network Drive Assault Module' flashed across the screen as Gary powered up the mobile suit. Soon, other control panel begin lighting up also. The screen begin to show the outside of the mobile suit. Within moments, the mobile suit was up and standing. Across the hanger, the other mobile suit too stood up and begin advancing toward the door.
"Darn it, they're sure to attack me after we are out of the hanger! Their main purpose in the first place must have been to steal these mobile suit!" Gary frown to himself. After that, he search for the weapons available on the mobile suit.
"WHAT THE!!! THIS MOBILE SUIT ONLY HAS 3 WEAPONS AND IS UNABLE TO FLY!?!" ============================================================================ 'RED ALERT!!! RED ALERT!!! Doom, Deathslasher, Tesaol, Buckload and Excel are being stolen!!! Get them back at all cost!' ============================================================================ Dope started up his mobile suit that the same time as the others. Soon his mobile suit was too up and standing.
"So, its name is Tesaol huh...HAHAHA, CLOSE RANGE COMBAT WEAPONS! THIS WILL BE FUN!!!" Dope said as Tesaol rushed out of the hanger, blasting more Zaku with its chest cannon. Next, it took out it beam saber and rushed toward the mobile suit that the Blue Comos didn't stole.
"EAT THIS!!!" Dope yelled as Tesaol sung its beam saber toward the dark looking mobile suit. However, the mobile suit manage to avoid it and fights back with its beam scythe.
"Stop it Dope! Did you forget our mission here? We are to steal these mobile suit. We don't want to hand them over damage." (Just got out of hanger, Jasime in Gouf-like mobile suit-Doom)
"YOU'RE NOISY!!!" (Tesaol trying to take down the black mobile suit but to no avail)
"Hey hey Dope, what Jasime said was right...However, don't you think we should destroy them first? They may give us trouble in the future." (Alex in Buster-like mobile suit-Buckload)
"SHUT UP, HE'S MINE!" (Tesaol again trying its best to take down the black mobile suit...) ============================================================================= At first, Tesaol was trying to take down Gary's mobile suit. Now it has became a 3 on 1 case with Gary losing his ground.
"Darn it...It is so hard to fight..." (Many beams shooting at him...Buckload shooting at Deathslasher)
While Deathslasher is avoiding the beams, Tesaol suddenly appeared in front of him and tries to slash him but Deathslasher somehow manage to block the attack with its buster shield. Next, Doom came out from behind, attempting to slash Deathslasher with its beam saber.
Deathslasher jumped to a side, avoiding the slash but was again getting gunned down by Buckload firepower. ============================================================================= 'It seems like the battle getting firece...Should I help the black mobile suit out?'
Excel marched into the battlefield, destroying hangers like the other 3 stolen mobile suit. As more Zaku tries to get out of the hanger, Excel amused itself by letting them try to shoot him before getting rid of them.
'This mobile suit is strong...Now, let me test its real power against the other 4.' Excel's pilot said as Excel marches towards the battle. ============================================================================= "EAT THIS!" Gary yelled out loud as he tries to slash Tesaol but Tesaol was too fast, avoiding Deathslasher slash with ease. After that, the 3 mobile suit rushed towards Deathslasher at all direction...
Suddenly, Excel gundam came out of nowhere, firing a shot in front of Deathslasher, blocking the 3 attacks. Next, it rushes forward to Tesaol and right in the face, fires a beam. However, Tesaol manages to dodge the attack.
"WHO IS THIS GUY?" (Dope panting in the cockpit after narrowing escaping death)
Within moments, Excel pushed back the attack of the 3 mobile suit.
"Let's retreat...We're no match for that mobile suit now." "NOOOO, THERE IS NO WAY I WOULD LOSE!!! NOT TO A LOSER LIKE THEM!!!" "Beat it Dope, we've lost. Let listen to Jasime and head back to base..." (Buckload and Doom drags Tesaol and flying off)
"Thanks man, I owe you one..." Gary radio to Excel. However, Excel just turned off and flies out of the base too. ============================================================================= Soon after the battle, Blue Comos retreated. However, they had damaged the Singapore base badly.
'Pilot of Deathslasher, please report to the Demolisher now.' A radio messaged Deathslasher... ============================================================================= As Deathslasher board Demolisher, the pilot of Excel lands somewhere outside the base. He loaded Excel onto his cargo truck and took off his helmet. Next, he walked into the truck and drove off...The name tag he is wearing flashed....Fabian....
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Post by ragnarox on Jul 24, 2006 20:54:52 GMT 7
Seems to have some parts adapted fro the Gundam SEED Fusion Roleplay... hahahahaha... Providing urself most of the action!
Nice chapter, Gary!
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Post by xxahpokexx on Jul 24, 2006 21:53:46 GMT 7
1 word : cliche (i think i might have spelt it wrong)
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Post by ragnarox on Jul 25, 2006 9:05:20 GMT 7
Oi... Dun say that... My first Phases are cliche too... The curtain hasn't draw yet... It's still early to judge everything...
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Post by xxahpokexx on Jul 25, 2006 10:59:24 GMT 7
he admitted it on msn lor XD
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